January 13, 2011

The starkness of a good tale

Dee-dee dee-dee . . .
Lately I've been watching lots of classic horror and sci-fi standards, including Rod Serling's "Twilight Zone". Some of those old stories are so good and so simple.

There aren't many elements in a Twilight Zone episode. It seems there are, at most, two concepts. There's the spacey element that provides the weirdness factor. And there's usually a character flaw driving the tale -- greed, avarice, fear, or a clawing for power or social status. That's it, just the two things.

But perhaps I should say there is another element, a silent one. It is the starkness of every scene. The best often have only one set: a room, a doctor's office, a car, a hotel room. Of course, it's just a half-hour show and you can only cram so many sets into that sliver of time. But it's more than that. The starkness is actually a player in the story. Against this purposely drab, minimalist background, the story can light up the night like a neon sign.

One or two characters, one idea, and one or two sets. Just let your story roll to its conclusion with nothing in its way. It's a good formula with a lesson for fiction writers, and it's one they've heard before: less is more. 

2 comments:

Anna Guess Pick said...

And the simplicity of black and white. I find color can sometimes be a distraction in art.

When you have the absence of living color you often see things quite differently - perhaps almost in a fifth dimension...as vast as space...as timeless as infinity. dee dee dee dee

writenow said...

You're absolutely right Annie. I was going to mention it but then I thought, "Well, they had no option for color, so it wasn't a choice." So I left it out. Nonetheless, it definitely adds to the impact. Good call.